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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-12 02:45:24 | 显示全部楼层
智慧的宝剑!
感觉诗人他又回到了人类纪元前世吧!
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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-16 21:43:59 | 显示全部楼层

55/Languor is upon your heart and the slumber is still on your eyes.Has not the word come to you that the flower is reigning in splendour among thorns? Wake, oh awaken! let not the time pass in vain!
      倦感涌上你的心,你那双眸也睡意猩猩。万荆丛中鲜花已怒放可难道你未曾得告知?醒醒,哦快点醒醒!莫让时光徒然过空虚无益。

      At the end of the stony path, in the country of virgin solitude, my friend is sitting all alone. Deceive him not. Wake, oh awaken!
      石头路的尽端,在荒芜的乡间,我的朋友他独坐其间。别哄骗他吧。醒来,哦,快快醒来吧!

      What if the sky pants and trembles with the heat of the midday sun -- what if the burning sand spreads its mantle of thirst---
       如果正午的天空于炎热之下颤抖喘息 -- 如果燃烧的沙土铺展出它饥渴万分的外衣。

       Is there no joy in the deep of your heart? At every footfall of yours, will not the harp of the road break out in sweet music of pain?
      你内心深处难道就没丝毫喜悦吗?而你每走一步时,难道没听到道路那竖琴演奏那痛苦又甘美的音乐吗?

*1/languor:n.倦怠;慵懒;懒洋洋
slumber:n.沉睡;睡眠; vi.睡眠;睡
reign:adj.(冠军)现任的; v.统治;盛行;为王;当政;为君;成为最重要的;成为最佳;成为最显著的
2/virgin:n.处女;新手;童男;童贞马利亚(耶稣之母);无…经验的人。adj.处女的;童贞的;贞洁的;天然的;未开发的;原始状态的;未改变的;未触动的
solitude:n.孤独,独处,独居
deceive:v.蒙骗;误导;欺骗(自己);诓骗;使人误信
3/pants:n.裤子,内裤;<英俚> 胡说,废话;次品,劣质品;adj.<英口>极坏的,糟糕的;劣质的,低劣的;int.哼,呸;v. 喘气,喘息
mantle:n.衣钵;斗篷;(尤指旧时的)披风;地幔;(可继承的)责任;覆盖层;职责;(煤气灯的)白炽罩;vt.覆盖;遮盖
4/harp:n.竖琴; vi.喋喋不休;唠叨;弹竖琴;不停地说

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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-18 02:00:43 | 显示全部楼层

56/Thus it is that thy joy in me is so full. Thus it is that thou hast come down to me. O thou lord of all heavens, where would be thy love if I were not?
      你在我内心才让我感觉充实呢。所以是你主动向我走来的。哦,你这诸天之主,在我以外你的爱又会给予谁呢?

      Thou hast taken me as thy partner of all this wealth. In my heart is the endless play of thy delight. In my life thy will is ever taking shape.
       你早就将我当成分享你财富的伙伴。你的欢乐是我幸福无边之源;我的人生一直都是你心愿的体现。

       And for this, thou who art the King of kings hast decked thyself in beauty to captivate my heart. And for this thy love loses itself in the love of thy lover, and there art thou seen in the perfect union of two.
       就是为此原因,你王中之王用美姿的装扮以获取我心;就是为此目的,你将爱给予了你爱人的爱里,而二者完美的结合更显现了你。

*2/play:v.玩;发挥;播放;扮演;玩耍;应付;击;上演;担当,充任;弹拨,吹奏;参加比赛;捉弄;假装;戏弄;等等。n. 比赛;游;活动;玩耍;戏剧;间隙;娱乐;剧本;比赛中的表现;轻快变幻的动作;比赛中的动作
delight:n.高兴;愉快;快乐;乐趣;乐事;令人高兴的事; vt.使高兴;使愉快;使快乐
take shape:形成;成形;具体化;有显著发展
3/deck:n.甲板;舱面;(船或公共汽车的)一层,层面;(屋后供憩息的)木制平台;(唱机的)转盘装置。vt.布置;装饰;打扮;打倒在地;揍趴下;用力击倒
captivate:vt. 迷住;使着迷
art thou:古英语,thou=you,art=are

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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-20 22:38:22 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 月色芙蓉 于 2024-8-29 23:52 编辑


57/Light, my light, the world-filling light, the eye-kissing light, heart-sweetening light!
      光明,哦,我的光明,照射四处的光明,亲吻双眸的光明,这让人欢欣甜蜜的光明!

      Ah, the light dances, my darling, at the centre of my life; the light strikes, my darling, the chords of my love; the sky opens, the wind runs wild, laughter passes over the earth.
      哦,我的生命里,亲爱的,光明跳着舞呢;亲爱的,它正弹拨我的爱那琴弦;天开了,风儿狂奔乱窜,大地上笑声滚滚

      The butterflies spread their sails on the sea of light. Lilies and jasmines surge up on the crest of the waves of light
       蝴蝶在光海上展开羽帆。百合与茉莉在光波上起伏翻转

      The light is shattered into gold on every cloud, my darling, and it scatters gems in profusion
      光芒四射,云朵金光点点,亲爱的,光也使得珠宝光彩斑斓

      Mirth spreads from leaf to leaf, my darling, and gladness without measure. The heaven's river has drowned its banks and the flood of joy is abroad.
      欢乐正在树叶间弥漫,亲爱的,欢乐无边。天堂的河流已决堤,这欢乐的洪流四处流溢,奔放不已。

*2/chord:n.弦;和弦;和音
laughter:n.笑声;笑
3/crest:n.山顶;波峰;顶峰;羽冠;(尤指象征历史悠久家族、机构等的)饰章,纹章;浪尖;鸟冠; v.到达山顶(或浪峰);达到顶点;到达洪峰
surge:vi.涌;激增;浪涌;汹涌;涌动;急剧上升;飞涨;使强烈地感到; n.(电流)浪涌;(数量的)急剧上升,激增;大量;(强烈感情的)突发;一大批;奔涌向前;突然的向上运动
*4/shatter:adj.筋疲力尽的;受到严重打击的;非常惊愕难过的;遭受极大打击的。v.(使感情等)粉碎,破灭;被粉碎;(使)破碎,碎裂;被破坏;给予极大打击;使极为惊愕难过
scatter:v.分散;撒;四散;散开;驱散;撒播。n.散落;零零星星;三三两两
profusion:n.大量;丰富;众多
5/Mirth:n.欢乐;欢笑


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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-22 21:02:25 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 月色芙蓉 于 2024-8-29 23:53 编辑


58/Let all the strains of joy mingle in my last song---
the joy that makes the earth flow over in the riotous excess of the grass, the joy that sets the twin brothers, life and death, dancing over the wide world, the joy that sweeps in with the tempest, shaking and waking all life with laughter, the joy that sits still with its tears on the open red lotus of pain, and the joy that throws everything it has upon the dust, and knows not a word.
      让所有对欢乐的辛苦追求融入我最后的歌吧--那欢乐,传遍大地上的草儿让它们欣喜无比;那欢乐,使生死这对孪生子,于宽阔无垠的世上狂歌欢舞;那欢乐,和暴风雨一起席卷而至,动摇唤醒一切生命;那欢乐,静伴红莲花的泪水,也伴着它盛开的阵痛里;那欢乐,把它曾所拥有抛掷空中尘里,无言可述!

*strains:n.菌株;应力;压力;张力;拉伤;扭伤;劳损;拉力;重负;重压之下出现的问题(或担忧等); v.损伤;拉伤;扭伤;使劲;竭力;尽力;过度使用;使不堪承受
mingle: v.混在一起;使混合;(使)与…结合;相交往,混杂其中;使联结
riotous:adj.狂欢的;骚乱的;暴乱的;纵情欢闹的
excess:过度;过量的;超过;过分;免赔额;超过的量;自负额;过多的量;放肆行为; adj.过度的;超额的;额外的;附加的
sweep:v.打扫; 清除;扫视; 扫去; 推送,吹走,冲走,带走;蜿蜒;挥动,舞动;梳;(使)轻轻掠过,轻轻擦过;迅速传播;猛烈吹过;步态轻盈地走;突然袭来; 获得全部胜利, 囊括各项冠军。n.扫; 清扫; 打扫; 掠; 挥动;广泛性; 全胜的一系列比赛; 巡行; 一长段,绵延弯曲的地带, 呈缓坡状的地带
tempest: n.暴风雨;大风暴;暴风雪


(*不太明白这是说啥事,估计可能是说快乐可以很简单,比如像他们节日里的狂欢歌舞,抛掷花朵和鲜艳的颜料那种,也不是不可理喻,如果那些节日是与神有关,那就是为了神因为神而快乐,并且想要快乐就不要考虑人间一切苦难。或许是希望人们能乐观积极向上,希望人们相信神并且随缘随喜,一切随神安排,即便是苦难。如果是精神战胜法,也有一定的道理,如果是极其深重的苦难里,你不去争取自己的自由权利等宝贵的东西,那种快乐就是低贱的了吧?所以我想知道的是:穷人和奴隶有权利快乐幸福吗?权利是有的,但是真正却又没有,不拥有,所以这段诗歌就是有点匪夷所思!


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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-26 17:27:10 | 显示全部楼层

59/ Yes, I know, this is nothing but thy love, O beloved of my heart---this golden light that dances upon the leaves, these idle clouds sailing across the sky, this passing breeze leaving its coolness upon my forehead.
      是的,我明了的,哦,我心爱之人,别无它物此为你爱--这舞于叶上之光,这横穿天际之云,这让我额头清凉之风。

      The morning light has flooded my eyes---this is thy message to my heart. Thy face is bent from above, thy eyes look down on my eyes, and my heart has touched thy feet.
      晨光淹没了我眸子--那是你传给我心灵的消息。你于空中俯脸而观,你的双眼凝视我眼;我的心也已触摸了你的双足。

*1/beloved:adj.亲爱的;钟爱的;深爱的;深受喜爱的; n.心爱的人
idle:adj.空闲的;闲置的;懒惰的;闲散的;懈怠的;没有工作的;漫无目的的。v.空转;无所事事;(尤指暂时地)关闭工厂,使(工人)闲着;挂空挡;闲荡;未熄火;混时间



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 楼主| 发表于 2024-8-29 23:50:13 | 显示全部楼层
60/On the seashore of endless worlds children meet. The infinite sky is motionless overhead and the restless water is boisterous. On the seashore of endless worlds the children meet with shouts and dances.
      孩子们相会在无垠世界的海岸。头顶上无穷尽的苍天静止不动,不安宁的海水喧闹汹涌;孩子们又舞又歌相会在无垠世界的海岸。

      They build their houses with sand and they play with empty shells. With withered leaves they weave their boats and smilingly float them on the vast deep. Children have their play on the seashore of worlds.
      他们玩耍空的贝壳又用沙盖起楼房。他们用枯叶编成小船又笑着将船漂到深远的海上。孩子们在世界的海岸有他们自己的游戏。

       They know not how to swim, they know not how to cast nets. Pearl fishers dive for pearls, merchants sail in their ships, while children gather pebbles and scatter them again. they seek not for hidden treasures, they know not how to cast nets.
       他们还不会游泳,也不知如何撒网捕鱼。采珠者潜海找寻珍珠,商人们张帆远航,孩子们将石头捡起又弄散。他们既不找寻隐秘的宝藏,也不知如何捕鱼撒网。

       The sea surges up with laughter and pale gleams the smile of the sea beach. Death-dealing waves sing meaningless ballads to the children, even like a mother while rocking her baby's cradle. The sea plays with children, and pale gleams the smile of the sea beach.
      大海翻腾又欢笑,泛起海滩苍白的微笑。致死的波涛,对孩子们唱着无聊的曲调,像母亲晃着婴儿床唱着催眠曲调。大海和孩子们一起嬉闹,海滩波涛泛起苍淡的微笑。

      On the seashore of endless worlds children meet. Tempest roams in the pathless sky, ships get wrecked in the trackless water, death is abroad and children play. On the seashore of endless worlds is the great meeting of children
      孩子们相会在无垠世界的海岸。暴风雨在无路的天空咆哮,船儿在无轨的海上被击翻,死神随时即来可孩子们依然游玩嬉闹。在无垠世界的海岸,孩子们进行着巨大的聚会游玩。

*1/infinite:adj.无限的;极大的;无穷尽的;无法衡量的; n.上帝;无限的事物;无穷尽的事物
boisterous:adj.热闹的;充满活力的;活蹦乱跳的
motionless:adj. 一动不动的;静止的
2/wither:adj.枯萎的;干枯的;干瘪的;枯槁的;瘦弱的;发育不良的;病态的;衰老憔悴的; v.(使)枯萎,凋谢;萎缩;(尤指渐渐)破灭,消失
smilingly:adv. 微笑着,含笑着
3/pebbles:n.鹅卵石;砾石; v.用卵石等)铺(pebble的第三人称单数形式)
scatter:v.分散;撒;四散;散开;驱散;撒播。n.散落;零零星星;三三两两
4/surge:vi.涌;激增;浪涌;汹涌;涌动;急剧上升;飞涨;使强烈地感到; n.(电流)浪涌;(数量的)急剧上升,激增;大量;(强烈感情的)突发;一大批;奔涌向前;突然的向上运动
gleam:v.发微光;(在眼中)闪现;(眼睛)表露出,流露出;隐约闪光;显得光洁明亮;闪烁; n.一线;微光(常指反光);一丝;(感情的)表露,闪现;少量
ballads:n.民谣;民歌;(节奏缓慢的)情歌;叙事诗
5/trackless:无轨;无轨的;无路的
tempest: n.暴风雨;大风暴;暴风雪

(*我也不太懂这段与神的关系,只是想打小p孩们的p股


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 楼主| 发表于 2024-9-1 06:17:43 | 显示全部楼层

61/The sleep that flits on baby's eyes---does anybody know from where it comes? Yes, there is a rumour that it has its dwelling where, in the fairy village among shadows of the forest dimly lit with glow-worms, there hang two timid buds of enchantment. From there it comes to kiss baby's eyes.
      掠过婴儿双眼的睡意---有谁知它来自哪里?是的,传说它住在某地,在森林的暗影里,在萤火虫照耀的童话村子,那儿悬挂着两颗羞怯中魔的花蕾,它就从那里飞来轻吻了婴儿的眸子。

      The smile that flickers on baby's lips when he sleeps -- does anybody know where it was born? Yes, there is a rumour that a young pale beam of a crescent moon touched the edge of a vanishing autumn cloud, and there the smile was first born in the dream of a dew - washed morning -- the smile that flickers on baby's lips when he sleeps.
      这闪现于婴儿睡梦中唇嘴的微笑,有谁知它生于哪里?是的,传说它是新月淡淡初光碰到将逝秋云的边缘,微笑生在转瞬即逝于晨的露珠梦里 -- 婴儿睡梦中这唇边微笑便这样闪闪现现。

      The sweet, soft freshness that blooms on baby's limbs---does anybody know where it was hidden so long? Yes, when the mother was a young girl it lay pervading her heart in tender and silent mystery of love---the sweet, soft freshness that has bloomed on baby's limbs.
      这绽放在婴儿四肢上的甜蜜清新,可有谁知它曾久藏于何地?是的,当母亲还是少女时,它就已用柔软和神秘的爱充溢了她的心——那甜蜜清新就这样绽放于婴儿的四肢。

*1/flit: vi.轻快地从一处到另一处;搬家;迁移;迁居;掠过; n.飞掠;夜逃;偷偷搬家
dwell:vtj. 居住,栖息
dimly:adv.模糊地;暗淡地;昏暗地
enchantment:n.陶醉;着魔;狂喜;中魔法
2/flicker:v.闪烁;摇曳;忽隐忽现;闪现;抖动;颤动;一闪而过;拍动;快速摆动; n.(光的)摇曳,闪烁,忽隐忽现;(情感、情绪的)闪现,一闪而过;(身体部位的)小而快的动作。
crescent:n.新月(伊斯兰教的象征);新月形;月牙形;新月形街区(一排房屋); adj.新月(形)的;逐渐变圆的
3/pervading:v.弥漫;渗透;遍及; adj.普遍的;无所不在的


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 楼主| 发表于 2024-9-5 05:28:37 | 显示全部楼层

62/When I bring to you coloured toys, my child, I understand why there is such a play of colours on clouds, on water, and why flowers are painted in tints---when I give coloured toys to you, my child.
      我送你色彩缤纷的玩具时,我的孩子,我自己也终于明白为何空中云儿有色彩、为何地上的水体也会如此斑斓多彩、为何所有鲜花都被画上各种色彩——当我送你彩色玩具时,我的孩子

      When I sing to make you dance I truly know why there is music in leaves, and why waves send their chorus of voices to the heart of the listening earth---when I sing to make you dance
      当我歌唱使你起舞时,我已深切了知,为何树叶会奏响乐曲,为何波浪会把合唱之歌献给聆听着的大地之心——当我歌唱使你起舞之时。

      When I bring sweet things to your greedy hands I know why there is honey in the cup of the flowers and why fruits are secretly filled with sweet juice---when I bring sweet things to your greedy hands
      我把甜食放入了你贪婪的手心之时,我就清楚了知,为何鲜花的杯盏里藏有蜂蜜,为何水果秘密贮满了甜蜜果汁——当我把甜食放入你贪婪的手心之时。

      When I kiss your face to make you smile, my darling, I surely understand what pleasure streams from the sky in morning light, and what delight that is that is which the summer breeze brings to my body---when I kiss you to make you smile.
      当我吻你脸让它浮起微笑时,我亲爱的,我是了解晨光中流经天际的是怎样欣喜之流,那是夏日吹在我身上的凉意——当我吻你脸让它浮起微笑时。

*1/tints:n.色调;(一层)淡色,浅色;染发;染发剂;淡色彩。v.染(发);给…略微着色;为…轻微染色。


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63/Thou hast made me known to friends whom I knew not. Thou hast given me seats in homes not my own. Thou hast brought the distant near and made a brother of the stranger.
      你将很多我曾陌生的你的朋友让我认识。你又在他人家中为我安排了坐席。你使个生人与我的距离缩短并成为我的手足兄弟。

      I am uneasy at heart when I have to leave my accustomed shelter; I forget that there abides the old in the new, and that there also thou abidest.
      不得已我离开业已熟悉的旧家时,我是感觉心绪不宁的;我忘了只是故人迁入了新居,还忘了您也会与我逗留于此。

       Through birth and death, in this world or in others, wherever thou leadest me it is thou, the same, the one companion of my endless life who ever linkest my heart with bonds of joy to the unfamiliar.
      通过生与死,通过这世界或灵异那边,无论哪里指引我的总是你,同样的,陪伴我无尽生命的也总是你,让我心神愉悦地欣赏陌生世界的依然是你。

      When one knows thee, then alien there is none, then no door is shut. Oh, grant me my prayer that I may never lose the bliss of the touch of the one in the play of many.
      一旦认知了你,人之间将会感觉熟悉,也不再有紧闭的门户。哦,准许我祈祷吧,使我不会失去与大众相处与你相处的幸福欢喜。

*2/accustomed:adj.习惯的;习惯于;通常的;惯常的。v.使习惯(于);使适应
accustom的过去分词和过去式。
abidest:v.遵守;(abide by)接受,遵照(规则,决定,劝告);逗留,停留。abide+st,只是古代英语而已,写在第二人称后面的动词那时是需要加est的,并不是最xx 的意思,因为它是动词,不是形容词,这就是最基础的区别!不要看AI 的错误翻译!
4/bliss:n. 幸福;极乐
alien:n.外国人;外星人;外侨;外星生物。adj.外星的;外国的;陌生的;格格不入;异域的;不熟悉;不相容;相抵触。v.〈诗〉疏远;离间;【法】(所有权的)让渡
grant:vt.授予;(尤指正式地或法律上)同意,准予,允许;(勉强)承认,同意。n.(政府、机构的)拨款


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64/On the slope of the desolate river among tall grasses I asked her, `Maiden, where do you go shading your lamp with your mantle? My house is all dark and lonesome--lend me your light.” she raised her dark eyes for a moment and looked at my face through the dusk. `I have come to the river,' she said, `to float my lamp on the stream when the daylight wanes in the west.' I stood alone among tall grasses and watched the timid flame of her lamp uselessly drifting in the tide.
     草高河寂的斜岸上, 我问她:“ 姑娘,你用披风遮护灯欲往何方?我的房屋黑暗孤寂--请借我你的灯吧!“穿过薄暮,她抬起乌黑眸子,盯着我脸一阵子。“我到河边来,”她说,“是要在日落西山时,将我的灯漂在水面上 。”我独自站立,于高高的草丛里,望着她那微弱的灯光无助地随波飘荡。

     In the silence of gathering night I asked her, `Maiden, your lights are all lit--then where do you go with your lamp? My house is all dark and lonesome--lend me your light.' She raised her dark eyes on my face and stood for a moment doubtful. `I have come,' she said at last, `to dedicate my lamp to the sky.' I stood and watched her light uselessly burning in the void.
     寂静的约会晚上,我问她:“姑娘,你的灯都已点上,你要拿着它去往何方?我的房屋黑暗孤寂--请借你的灯给我吧!”夜色里,她抬起乌黑的眸子,望着我的脸,犹疑了一阵子。“我已到来这里,”她最后说,“我想把灯献给老天的。”我独自站在那里,望着她的灯无聊地在虚空中发光。

     In the moonless gloom of midnight I ask her, `Maiden, what is your quest, holding the lamp near your heart? My house is all dark and lonesome--lend me your light.' She stopped for a minute and thought and gazed at my face in the dark. `I have brought my light,' she said, `to join the carnival of lamps.' I stood and watched her little lamp uselessly lost among.
     无月的半夜漆黑黑,凉气逼人,我问她:“姑娘,究竟是为何,你把灯紧抱在胸呢?我的屋子又黑暗孤寂--请借你的灯给我吧!“她站在深黑的夜凝视着我,做了会子思索。“我带着我的灯来,”她说,“是想让它参加灯的狂欢节日的。”我站着看她那小小的灯无用地消失在一片璀璨的灯光里。

*1/desolate:adj.荒凉的,忧伤的; vt.使感到凄凉
mantle:n.衣钵;斗篷;披风;地幔;责任;覆盖层;职责;v. 遮盖
wane:v. n. 减弱
2/void:n. adj. 无效,空的
3/carnival:n.狂欢节;激动人心的事物组合



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 楼主| 发表于 2024-9-20 03:01:17 | 显示全部楼层

65/What divine drink wouldst thou have, my God, from this overflowing cup of my life?
      你想喝到怎样的神圣之饮?哦,我的神,你可是想从我流溢生命的杯盏中品饮?

      My poet, is it thy delight to see thy creation through my eyes and to stand at the portals of my ears silently to listen to thine own eternal harmony?
      我的诗人,你是否因借由我的眼睛,看你的创造物;又是否站在我耳洞之门,静听你自己永恒和谐之音;你是否因此开心?

       Thy world is weaving words in my mind and thy joy is adding music to them. Thou givest thyself to me in love and then feelest thine own entire sweetness in me
       你的世界于我脑海中编织字句,你欢喜地将它们谱成乐曲。你总是以爱将自己交付给我,又感到我生命里你的所有甜蜜。

*1/divine:adj.神圣的;神的;上帝的;非凡的;天赐的;绝妙的;极美的。v.猜到;领悟;(用丫形杖)探测(地下水);n.牧师;神学家
2/eternal:adj.永恒的;永久的;不朽的;无休止的;没完没了的;永不停止的。n.永恒事物; Eternal 上帝;与定冠词the 连用
harmony:n.和谐;协调;和睦;和声;融洽
3/sweetness:n.甜;芬芳;讨人喜欢;令人愉快


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66/She who ever had remained in the depth of my being, in the twilight of gleams and of glimpses;she who never opened her veils in the morning light, will be my last gift to thee, my God, folded in my final song
     一直潜于我生命深处的那个她,就在闪烁不定难以捕捉的光影里;她从未于晨曦里揭开过其面纱,哦,我的神,我把她收入我的歌里,将作为最后的赠礼献于你。

      Words have wooed yet failed to win her; persuasion has stretched to her its eager arms in vain.
      求爱的话我已说过但没赢得她的心。对她伸出热切手臂的劝逼也只是徒劳费心。

       I have roamed from country to country keeping her in the core of my heart, and around her have risen and fallen the growth and decay of my life.
      我曾漫游七国八方,却把她深藏于心上,我生命成长中的衰荣亦随着她起落跌宕。

      Over my thoughts and actions, my slumbers and dreams, she reigned yet dwelled alone and apart.
      她掌管着我的行为思想,还有我的梦想,而她却独自居住,离群索居。

      many a man knocked at my door and asked for her and turned away in despair. There was none in the world who ever saw her face to face, and she remained in her loneliness waiting for thy
      许多人曾敲过我房门想找她,但最后都失望沮丧地离去啦。世上无人面面相会见过她,所以其实她是在孤独中等候着你呐。

*1/twilight:n.暮光;黄昏;暮色;薄暮;晚期;衰退期;没落时期; adj.(局面或思想领域)朦胧的,模糊的,界限不清的;虚幻的;奇妙神秘的
gleam:v.发微光;(在眼中)闪现;(眼睛)表露出,流露出;隐约闪光;显得光洁明亮;闪烁; n.一线;微光(常指反光);一丝;(感情的)表露,闪现;少量;
glimpse:n.一瞥;一看;短暂的感受(或体验、领会); vt.瞥见;看一眼;开始领悟;开始认识到
2/woo:vt.求爱;追求(异性);争取…的支持;寻求…的赞同
3/roam:閒逛(於);漫步(於);漫遊(於)。了解更多。
4/slumbers:n.v.睡;睡眠
reign:v. 统治;盛行;为王;当政;为君;成为最佳;成为最重要的;成为最显著的
dwell:v.居住;栖身。


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67/Thou art the sky and thou art the nest as well.
       虽然你是老天,可你也是巢穴

       O thou beautiful, there in the nest is thy love that encloses the soul with colours and sounds and odours.
       呵, 美丽的你,那巢穴里,安放着你的爱意,圈围着灵魂呢,还用缤纷色彩、各种音乐和多种香气来装饰。

       There comes the morning with the golden basket in her right hand bearing the wreath of beauty, silently to crown the earth.
        清晨来了呢,她右手挂着金蓝子,里面装着美的花环,默默为大地加冕。

       And there comes the evening over the lonely meadows deserted by herds, through trackless paths, carrying cool draughts of peace in her golden pitcher from the western ocean of rest.
       晚上畜群离去归家里,黄昏遍及孤寂的草坪,又穿过了无人迹的小径,在它金色的瓶里,放着宁静凉风,那瓶子来于西面大海的休憩。

       But there, where spreads the infinite sky for the soul to take her flight in, reigns the stainless white radiance. There is no day nor night, nor form nor colour, and never, never a word.
       在那里,纯白的光辉照耀遍地,灵魂翱翔于无穷天际。那里没有昼夜、也无关形色,且永远、永远的沉默,无可言说。

*1/enclose:围住;随函(或包裹等)附上;(用墙、篱笆等)把…围起来;附入;
odour:n. 气味, 臭气, 香气, 味道, 迹象, 名誉, 声誉;n【医】 气味
3/wreath:n.花环(传统上圣诞节时挂在门上);花圈(用于祭奠);花冠(旧时用作荣誉的象征);(烟、云等的)圈,缭绕
4/draughts:n.穿堂风;国际象棋;一饮(的量);通风气流;饮剂
trackless:adj.1. 无踪迹的;不留痕迹;2. 无轨道的;3. 无人迹的;无路的
pitcher:n.投掷者;投球手;(尤指旧时的)带柄的陶罐
5/infinite:adj.无限的;极大的;无穷尽的;无法衡量的;n.上帝;无限的事物;无穷尽的事物
reigns:n.任期;君主统治时期;当政期; v.统治;盛行;为王;当政;为君;成为最重要的;成为最佳;成为最显著的
radiance:n. (散发出来的)光辉;容光焕发;红光满面


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 楼主| 发表于 2024-10-9 05:59:08 | 显示全部楼层

68/Thy sunbeam comes upon this earth of mine with arms outstretched and stands at my door the live
-long day to carry back to thy feet clouds made of my tears and sighs and songs.
      你的阳光照在我站的土地,漫长的整日里,我张开双臂,站在我门前,只想搬回到你面前那些云 -- 那用我的眼泪、我的叹息和我的歌儿制作的云。

     With fond delight thou wrappest about thy starry breast that mantle of misty cloud, turning it into num
-berless shapes and folds and colouring it with hues everchanging.
     你开心地将这云雾的斗篷披在星星点缀的胸膛,将它变出无数的褶叠和形状,还变幻无常的颜色将它染上。

      It is so light and so fleeting, tender and tearful and dark, that is why thou lovest it, O thou spotless and serene. And that is why it may cover thy awful white light with its pathetic shadows.
      它那样的轻柔,那样的短暂、温柔、含泪又黯淡,也就是为何你如此爱它,呵,你是如此纯洁安详啊。这就是为何它能以其可怜的影子去遮盖你可畏的白光。

*1/outstretch:v.伸展;展开;扩张;拉(伸)长
livelong:adj.漫长的;整个的;完全的;n.紫景天
2/starry:adj.布满星星的;明亮的;闪闪发光的;像星星的
mantle:n.衣钵;斗篷;(尤指旧时的)披风;地幔;(可继承的)责任;覆盖层;职责;(煤气灯的)白炽罩;vt.覆盖;遮盖
folds:v.折叠,对折(纸、织物等);包;裹;折小,叠平,可折小,可叠平(以便贮存或携带);
n.皱褶;折痕(fold 的复数形式);(Folds)人名;(英)福尔兹
hues:n.色调;颜色;色度;观点;信仰
numberless:adj.无数的;难以计数的
everchanging:不断变化的;就此改变;变幻无常
3/fleeting:adj. 短暂的;转瞬即逝的;闪现的
serene:adj.宁静的;平静的;安详的; n.平静(的海);晴朗(天空)
pathetic:adj.可怜的,可悲的,令人怜惜的;差劲的,软弱的,令人生厌的;没用的,无效的;无力的,不成功的


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 楼主| 发表于 2024-10-9 05:59:52 | 显示全部楼层

谢谢!
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谢谢!
是不是我比那诗人可爱?!

好象是,但我还没看完
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69. The same stream of life that runs through my veins night and day runs through the world and dances in rhythmic measures.
      日夜地,这同一股生命之河,流淌在我血管里呢,也在世界日夜奔腾着,应着节拍跳舞着。

      It is the same life that shoots in joy through the dust of the earth in number -less blades of grass and breaks into tumultuous waves of leaves and flowers.
      就这同样的生命,快乐迅猛地从大地尘土里,生长出无数芳草叶子,繁花密叶也抨发出激情滚滚的波纹。

      It is the same life that is rocked in the ocean-cradle of birth and of death, in ebb and in flow.
      就这同样的生命,被大海的生死摇篮摇动着,潮起又潮落呢。

       I feel my limbs are made glorious by the touch of this world of life. And my pride is from the life-throb of ages dancing in my blood this moment.
      我的四肢充满荣耀,就因其受生命世界的抚摸。而我的骄傲,缘于时代生命悸动的脉搏,此刻在我血里跳着舞蹈。

*1/rhythmic:adj.有节奏的,节奏分明的;有韵律的;有规律的; n.韵律论
measures:v.测量;度量;估量,判定(重要性、价值或影响等);(指尺寸、长短、数量等)量度为。n.措施;方法;标准;(一定的)量;程度;尺度
2/tumultuous:adj.动荡的;喧嚣的;动乱的;热烈的;欢腾的;狂暴的;嘈杂的
3/ebb:n.落潮;退潮; vi.落;衰退;退;减退;衰弱
4/life-throb :生命悸动


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71/That I should make much of myself and turn it on all sides, thus casting coloured shadows on thy radiance --- such is thy maya.
     我应当完善自己、让自己面面完美,这样纪录片将各种颜色投在你的光辉里——这便是你的摩耶。

*这段说的是印度教的古老宗教哲学思想,说万物只是幻象而已,最好境界就是自我与幻象与神的结合。(其实根据研究,中美洲说的玛雅一词应该指的就是印度的摩耶,这俩地区远古时应该是有往来的!如今的科学研究也有人提到万物是幻象一说。)

     Thou settest a barrier in thine own being and then callest thy severed self in myriad notes. This thy self -separation has taken body in me.
     你在你自己体内竖起道隔栏,又用许多不同音调呼唤喊你自己做些服务。你这分身已在我体内成形

     The poignant song is echoed through all the sky in many - coloured tears and smiles, alarms and hopes;waves rise up and sink again,dreams break and form. In me is thy own defeat of self.
     感伤的歌声在诸天回荡,在多彩的眼泪与微笑里回荡,在震惊与希望里回荡;潮落潮起,梦碎梦起。在我思想里是你击败了你自己。

     This screen that thou hast raised is painted with innu - merable figures with the brush of the night and the day. Behind it thy seat is woven in wondrous mys - teries of curves, casting away all barren lines of straight - ness.
     你卷起的那道帘幕,是以日夜为画笔,绘出的形象无数。那后面你的坐垫子,是用奇妙的曲线织成的,是抛弃了无趣的直线织成的。

      The great pageant of thee and me has overspread the sky. With the tune of thee and me all the air is vibrant, and all ages pass with the hiding and seeking of thee and me.
      你我举办的盛会铺满天空。你我的歌声震彻天空,你我玩捉迷藏时,一切时代都那么过去矣。

*1/radiance:n. (散发出来的)光辉;容光焕发;红光满面
maya:摩耶(也译为“幻”,梵语Maya)音译为“摩耶”,意译“幻、幻象、幻术”。该词最早出现在印度最古老的宗教典籍《梨俱吠陀》中。
2/myriad:n.大量;无数; adj.无数的;多种的,各式各样的
notes:n.笔记,记录,注释,(外交文书)照会,纸币,特征,便条,批注,正式文件,短笺,单音,按语,图书资料,录音或唱片等封套介绍;v.注意,留意;指出,表明;记录,记下;着重提到,强调;为 (书等) 加注;用音符记
3/poignant:adj.令人感伤的,令人沉痛的;尖锐的,尖刻的,切中要害的;(气味)浓烈的,<古>辛辣的;悲惨的,酸楚的;强烈的,深刻的
4/innumerable:adj.无数;很多的;多得数不清的
wondrous:adj.奇异的;美好的;了不起的
curves:n.曲线,弯曲,曲面,弧线,(投向击球员的)曲线球; v.(使)沿曲线运动,呈曲线形
barren:adj.贫瘠的;不毛的;不孕的;不育的;无益的;不结果实的; n.荒原;不毛之地
5/pageant:盛会,选美比赛,内容繁杂有趣的场面,盛大华丽的情景,穿古代服装的游行,再现历史场景的娱乐活动
overspread:v.布满,覆盖


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